Noble offered excellent feedback, telling me to narrow it down and not to make any generalized assumptions. After discussing with her the issues of sorting at Stonestown she told me to phrase my problem like this:
"Customers who frequent Stonestown (you can change it later) may not be aware of zero waste in San Francisco that is currently in use."
And to phrase my purpose system like:
"The purpose of this study was to develop or create a system that will spread awareness of the importance of zero waste."
She also told me because Stonestown was so close to campus, it would be too easy and to get out of our comfort zones and find a place new and a little farther away.
Problem statement draft (left). Revised during meeting with Professor Noble (right).
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